By Jean Reidy; illus. by Margaret Chodos-Irvine
Lovely First Reviews for LIGHT UP THE NIGHT!
By Jean Reidy; illus. by Margaret Chodos-Irvine
This past month, when I had three other writing projects going, a new story idea sprang to life. Not only that, it roared and flailed and gnashed until it forced me to jot down ideas – which I did, in submission, in a notebook.
These scenes, bits of dialog, and possible themes continue to flow and I face the common writer’s temptation – do I ditch my old, “stale” projects and follow this new muse? And if I don’t go with it now, when will I ever have that momentum back?
The answer: National Novel Writing Month
In my view, you can either approach the month of November with a blank slate and a dose of dread, then squeak out a daily word count in misery. OR you can let a current idea simmer until then. Simmer while characters reveal themselves, subplots present themselves and true stories rise to the surface of a pot of bubbling ideas that you season and stir (please pardon the mixed metaphor – imagine the flailing gnashing beast in the boiling pot, if you will) without the 30-day pressure AND without the pain of having ditched a current project for a new love.
Without that pressure, my mind and story are free to take twists and turns and detours I might feel less compelled to explore with a daily word count looming. But here’s the real kicker, without engaging in the actual writing of the novel, I’m keeping that energy, that honeymoon with my idea, fresh long enough to LOVE fleshing it out. Creativity can’t always blossom in a pressure cooker. But it can when I’m in my “I can’t wait ’til November” state of mind.
So if you have an idea that just can’t wait – you might just want to make it wait, until November. And in the meantime, let it roar and snarl and gnash itself out of captivity right into a notebook. Make your idea work for November. When then, it will get the attention it deserves.
TOO PRINCESSY! comes out in January 2012 from Bloomsbury and you can preorder it here. Find out more at https://jeanreidy.com/TOO_PRINCESSY.html.
Thanks to all those who so kindly wished me a happy board book birthday. The best part about this birthday – I didn’t get any older. And with the TOO PURPLEY! board book out in the world, I’m still smiling.
Thanks also to everyone who entered PB Peek #12. If you have a minute, read through the fun and funny titles. I can just see the picture books behind those covers. I wish I could pick more than one. Please watch my blog for another PB Peek later this year.
If you didn’t win today, I have another exciting way for you to win a critique.
Carrie Harris is celebrating the release of her new zombie book BAD TASTE IN BOYS and she’s holding an auction to benefit the Giving Library at the University of Michigan C. S. Mott Children’s Hospital. Well guess who donated a critique!! So if that PB of yours is itching for a read. Here’s the link:
http://nightofthegivingdead.blogspot.com/2011/06/picture-book-critique-by-author-jean.html
Also, being auctioned off are signed copies of TOO PURPLEY! and TOO PICKLEY! You can bid on those here:
http://nightofthegivingdead.blogspot.com/2011/06/signed-copies-of-too-purpley-and-too.html
Carrie has loads of other items and it’s a terrific cause, so please bid high and bid often. Here’s the general auction link:
http://carrieharrisbooks.com/night-of-the-giving-dead
Now back to business. I’ve kept you guessing long enough. So without any more delay, the winner of PB Peek #12 is ….
Congratulations!!!!
TOO PURPLEY! comes out in board book format on July 19th. It’s purple. It’s adorable. AND it’s virtually indestructible. Now that’s something to celebrate!
So in honor of its board book birthday I’m holding a
Sign up for a critique by entering your picture book WORKING TITLE in the comment section of this blog post anytime (midnight to midnight Mountain Time) on July 19th. Titles submitted before or after July 19th will not be considered.
I’ll throw all titles into a hat and pick 1 for critique.
Keep in mind:
* Manuscripts must be 1000 words or less.
* I accept only fiction.
* Level of detail in the critique will vary based on my impression of the caliber of the writing.
* Please understand that I’m not an editor and will not be providing line-editing of your work. My critique will be comprised of suggestions for improving your manuscript. So please send me your most polished piece.
* The critique winner must e-mail me his/her manuscript as a Word attachment within 48 hours of the announcement . Manuscripts will be kept completely confidential. When I receive the manuscript, I’ll let the author know when they can expect my critique.
* As with any art form, likes and dislikes are entirely subjective. Please understand that my critiques are only one reader’s/writer’s opinion. It’s always wise to seek feedback from a few different readers. If my ideas resonate with you, they’re yours to use. If you disagree, I encourage you to compare my comments with those of other readers. But in the end, it’s your book. Stay true to your vision.
I look forward to reading your work.
Jean
P.S. And don’t forget to check out the TOO PURPLEY! board book. Perfect for little hands (and teeth!). You can order it here.
P.S.S And while you’re at it, enter to win an autographed TOO PURPLEY! board book on Goodreads. Here’s the giveaway page.
To celebrate the release of the TOO PURPLEY! Board Book, I’m giving away a free autographed copy on Goodreads. Check it out!
Literary agent, Mary Kole, who specializes in children’s literature at the Andrea Brown Literary Agency, recently completed her 5-part Novel Beginnings Workshop. Her thoughtful critiques of 5 submitted novel openers are brimming with tips on writing beginnings that hook your readers. Stop by her blog to read these detailed critiques AND to have a look at her agent wish list.
For a sneak peek from the workshops, here are my top takeaways. Thanks, Mary!
Workshop 1: Interiority and characterizing details reveal the main character as a person. Make sure your writing is mimetic.
Workshop 2: Opening paragraphs ground readers in time and place. Your narrator’s voice must match the time period and vantage point of your story – which is especially important in historical novels.
Workshop 3: Beware of play-by-play narration that is incidental to the story. It’s more important for your reader to understand the context of the action. Voice is critical, in children’s literature especially. We need to know what’s in our main character’s head in the opening scene and not allow our adult point of view to slip in. And as an addendum from Workshop 4 – if you can’t change your voice, change your character to fit your voice.
Workshop 4: Beware of jarring or dialog heavy beginnings that don’t ground the reader. Improper grounding leads to confusion which leads to distraction. Openings should fully engage your readers rather than causing them to step outside the story to rethink what they just read. When readers need to step outside the story, the stakes diminish. See also Workshop 3.
Workshop 5: Readers need to be emotionally involved with the main character right from the start. What might prevent readers from bonding with your main character? Dry adult language, dense writing, invisible stakes or unclear motivation.
To read the submissions in full and Mary Kole’s workshops in their entirety check out http://kidlit.com/ .
Last summer when I traveled to Uganda I was quite picky about my traveling companions. They had to be fun, hardy and have a LOT of heart. That’s why Audrey Vernick’s buffalo made the cut.
After all, if he could handle kindergarten, he could handle most anything. Sure enough, I found that this treasure of a picture book, Is Your Buffalo Ready for Kindergarten? delights kids everywhere.
Now, in Audrey’s latest book, in bookstores June 28th, our favorite buffalo has got the beat. He’s learning to play the drums! YES! And he’s sure to leave his mark, not only on the music world but on the children’s literary world as well. WOOHOO! Check it out!
Of course, this news begs the question “What will he do next?”
Well that’s precisely what I asked my friend, fellow picture book author, and buffalo lover, Audrey Vernick. So I’m bubbling over with pride at presenting Audrey’s thoughts on brainstorming and her hilarious Buffalo Bucket List. Go, Audrey!
Brainstorming for buffalo ideas has everything to do with Daniel Jennewein, the illustrator of IS YOUR BUFFALO READY FOR KINDERGARTEN? and TEACH YOUR BUFFALO TO PLAY DRUMS. The buffalo I first wrote about was just this idea of a buffalo until Daniel brought him to life. The ideas I envision now are very closely tied to the images he created; there’s no way to separate them.
I cannot resist the impulse to put my buffalo in costumes and give him props, which is why both the Winter and Summer Olympics really call me. I would love to see the buffalo go for gold. The publishing reality of that, of course, is a pretty tiny sales/marketing window, and so I’m sure it won’t happen, but just envision: Speedo/goggle-clad Buffalo in the 400-meter medley, competitive trampoline, fencing, canoe. For the winter sports–bobsled, ski jump, curling, figure skating (pairs).
All I have to do is think it and I can see what Daniel would come up with, and well, that’s a party in my head. When I think about brainstorming in general, as requested by my lovely host, I stumbled upon a surprising reality: I don’t really brainstorm. (How’s that for an engaging guest blog post?) An idea comes to me–via something I say or think–and I weigh it for story potential.
I am at my least creative when actively seeking ideas, a true brainstormer’s worst nightmare. But because my buffalo already exists, he’s an exception. I stink at brainstorming from scratch, but I had one heck of a good time coming up with this bucket list for my buffalo.
And now (drum roll) ….
THE BUFFALO’S BUCKET LIST:
Jean, thank you for giving me the opportunity to answer one of the best questions I’ve ever been asked. Buffalo’s Bucket List. That, my friend, is an award winner.
Audrey! I love it. So the Buffalo is a Yankees fan? Who would have guessed? And don’t be surprised if some seamstress fan doesn’t fashion that buffalo Speedo for him in time for London 2012. Thanks so much Audrey for stopping by. We can’t wait until June 28th!
For these and Audrey’s other award-winning books visit her website at http://www.audreyvernick.com/index.html.
And don’t forget to keep up with Audrey and her drum-playing sidekick at these other blog tour stops:
June 29th with Peter Salomon at http://www.peteradamsalomon.com/blog/
July 6th with Ruth McNally Barshaw at http://elliemcdoodle.blogspot.
July 13th with Laurie Thompson at http://lauriethompson.com
Now let’s open it up. Do any of you buffalo fans have “to dos” to add to his list? Let Audrey know in the comments section below.
… is coming this July. Watch for it!
(What is a Picture Book Peek Week? Find out here.)
LitWorld is such a terrific organization. You might remember, they sponsored World Read Aloud Day. Here are easy ways to help with their summer endeavor.
LitWorld is spreading the power of story from Kenya to Harlem and we need your help sparking our LitSummer! We are calling out to our community to donate books and school supplies as we embark on summer projects to benefit young people across hemispheres, including our first ever Story Power Camp at the Polo Grounds in Harlem and our LitWeek initiative in Kibera, Kenya.
WHAT WE NEED:
Visit LitWorld here and contribute to LitSummer drive by June 30th!