TOO PRINCESSY! is out and “pinking up” bookstore and library shelves everywhere.
“Bright colors and high visual energy match the quick verse … observers will be tickled that as hard as this girl clings to her indefatigable determination to be bored, she’s actually having a quite a romp … and kids will want re-reads.” Kirkus
Now that’s something to celebrate!
So I’m holding a
MONDAY, FEBRUARY 6TH
I’ll throw all titles into a hat and pick 1 for critique.
Keep in mind:
* Manuscripts must be 1000 words or less.
* I accept only fiction.
* Please understand that I’m not an editor and will not be providing line-editing of your work. My critique will be comprised of suggestions for improving your manuscript. So please send me your most polished piece.
* The critique winner must e-mail me his/her manuscript as a Word attachment within 48 hours of the announcement . Manuscripts will be kept completely confidential. When I receive the manuscript, I’ll let the author know when they can expect my critique.
* As with any art form, likes and dislikes are entirely subjective. Please understand that my critiques are only one reader’s/writer’s opinion. It’s always wise to seek feedback from a few different readers. If my ideas resonate with you, they’re yours to use. If you disagree, I encourage you to compare my comments with those of other readers. But in the end, it’s your book. Stay true to your vision.
I look forward to reading your work.
Jean
P.S. And don’t forget to check out TOO PRINCESSY! right here!
Congratulations Jean! Love the cover!<br /><br />Marian's Magic<br /><br />Thank you,<br />Janet
Greetings, Jean! It is darling!<br /><br />Where Are Brooklyn's Bows?<br /><br />~Raychelle
Would love a critique from you! My working title is "Eduardo, the Museum Mouse"<br /><br />Thanks, Jean!
My Magic Moment<br />by Carole Brooks
Congratulations! So adorable.<br /><br />Mine is <br />Monsterrific!<br />by Vivian Wexler<br /><br />Would LOVE a critique
She'll Be Here This Afternoon!
My working title is "The Rhyme Machine". Thanks for the chance, Jean!
Congrats, Jean. Too Princessy is adorable!<br /><br />Working title for me: Ally Rednic: A Riches to Rags Story
A Season For Green<br /><br />Congrats on the book!<br /><br />-Alexa
Congrats on the latest book.<br /><br />My picture book:<br />Emma's Green Christmas<br /><br />Thanks for doing this!
Hello Jean,<br /><br />I'd love your feedback on:<br /><br />"Beaky's Book"<br /><br />Thank you!<br /><br />cathy 54321 at hotmail dot com
Can't wait to share it with my daughter!<br /><br />~Incredible Kate<br /><br />Thank you!<br />brooke
~Incredible Kate<br /><br />brooke_servoss@hotmail.com
Monster Face Pancakes<br /><br />Congrats Jean!<br /><br />Denise Schurr<br />deniseschurr@gmail.com
Thanks for such a great offer, and LOVE the picture book peek. The Squirmy Scarecrow Thanks, Donna Koppelman
Thanks, Jean, for this opportunity!<br /><br />"Baby Bowls"<br /><br />Cindyb
The Slobbery Kiss of Doom
I appreciate such a wonderful opportunity. <br /><br />My working title is, "Something's in my Bed"<br /><br /><br />Thanks,<br />Sally
Tres adorable!<br /><br />Perfectly Pirate<br /><br />-Lindsay
Congrats on your newest picture book, Jean! I wonder what your next 'Too…' book will be! It's such a fun series. :)<br /><br />Hmm…not sure which picture book manuscript I'll enter. I think I'll go with:<br /><br />Step Away From This Book!
Thank you and congrats!<br />Title: Abigail's Halloween<br /><br />Annie Silvestro
Too cute! Congratulations, Jean!<br /><br />My working title: Vernon Worm<br /><br />Thanks!<br />Sheri
Love it! congrats!<br /><br />Jungle Jitters<br /><br />Thanks!<br />Alison
Congrats. Thanks for doing this!<br /><br />JIVE TURKEYS<br /><br />-Nikki
Fabulous Cover, Jean!<br /><br />Run Goose, Run!
Looking forward to reading the new book. Thanks for this opportunity! <br /><br />Working title: <br /><br />The Thistlegulch Sisters<br /><br />Thanks,<br />Rebecca
Ooooooh! What intriguing and fun titles everyone. <br /><br />But I'm afraid I can only pick one. <br /><br />According to the Random Number Generator, my winner is:<br /><br />MY MAGIC MOMENT<br />by Carole Brooks!!<br /><br />Congratulations, Carole. Please send me your manuscript as a Word attachment.<br /><br />Thank you all for entering. I hope to see you back on my blog again soon.<br /
Oh, my goodness! This is indeed MY MAGIC MOMENT! <br />I'm really shocked at the luck of the draw.<br /><br />Thank you.<br />Manuscript will be forthcoming.<br /><br />Carole 🙂
Congrats Carole – what a serendipitous title!
A big thank you, Jean, for providing this "pay it forward" peek to fellow writers.<br />I greatly appreciate your critique of my manuscript and value your input.<br />Sincerely,<br />Carole
My pleasure, Carole!