Free critique of a selected picture book manuscript
Here’s how it works:
Sign up for a critique by entering your picture book WORKING TITLE in the comment section of this blog post anytime (midnight to midnight Mountain Time) on February 14th. Titles submitted before or after February 14th will not be considered.
I’ll throw all titles into a hat and pick 1 for critique.
Keep in mind:
* Manuscripts must be 1000 words or less.
* I accept only fiction.
* Level of detail in the critique will vary based on my impression of the caliber of the writing.
* Please understand that I’m not an editor and will not be providing line-editing of your work. My critique will be comprised of suggestions for improving your manuscript. So please send me your most polished piece.
* The critique winner must e-mail me his/her manuscript as a Word attachment within 72 hours of the announcement . Manuscripts will be kept completely confidential. When I receive the manuscript, I’ll let the author know when they can expect my critique.
* As with any art form, likes and dislikes are entirely subjective. Please understand that my critiques are only one reader’s/writer’s opinion. It’s always wise to seek feedback from a few different readers. If my ideas resonate with you, they’re yours to use. If you disagree, I encourage you to compare my comments with those of other readers. But in the end, it’s your book. Stay true to your vision.
I look forward to reading your work.
Jean
Awesome, can't wait!
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Shame I don't have Word. Good luck everyone!
Catherine, if it's Word compatible – like Open Office, I'll take it.
I love it. See you on the 14th. Thanks!
I just have to say how much your books have been popping up in my life lately (happily). We took them out of the library and had to renew them so we could continue to reread each night. I just turned in the Scholastic order form, then I read the CWIM interview with you. Now I find this blog. Eerie, but fun!! Can't wait until Valentine's Day. Thanks!!!
Good luck to everyone who is participating!
I can turn it into Word from Microsoft Works, sorted!
What a great way to celebrate Valentine's Day! Thanks for offering up a free critique! <br /><br />My PB working title is: <br />MONSTERELLA
JEREMY STRICKER AND THE HAPPY BOTTOM (Happy Vday, and thanks for opportunity!)
It's time to enter! Yay! I'd like to enter my PB manuscript "London Brown Is Falling Down."<br /><br />Can't wait to see if I win! : )
Is this the right place to post a title? Seems odd that I'd be first, so here goes:<br />"Zooth Fairy."<br />Thanks for the opportunity, Jean.
Thanks for offering this critque contest! My entry is:<br /><br />Mama! Not Mama.<br /><br />Best Wishes,<br />Joseph
GRANNY PAM ON THE ROOF<br /><br />Thanks so much for this cool contest. Happy Valentine's Day!
You're wonderful, Jean, to offer this opportunity! Happy Valentine's Day to you. My pb title is "Feed that Monster."
Sooooo coolbeans smothered in awesomesauce!! I hope I win! <br /><br />My PB Working title is: Walter the Water Bear (or Walter Bear for short)
Thanks for the contest. My picture book is Mike Magnoliacone and the Big Bad Bug.
Thanks so much for doing this.<br /><br />My title is: Hooray For Fall!<br /><br />I hope I win!!:)<br />Sharon
Good luck and Happy Valentines Day to everyone!<br /><br /><br />My title is 'Sheldon Steiner Super Whiner'.
Thanks, Jean.<br /><br />NIGHT OWL
My title is "Lucy the Green Monster." Happy Valentine's Day!
Would you consider a collection of poems? If so, please add mine, working title:<br />HALLOWEEN RHYMES<br /><br />Thanks for doing this!
Oh my gosh, it is so fun to read all these titles!<br /><br />Mine is Charlemagne the Fashionable
Thanks so much, Jean. This is so generous of you, and you always give amazing advice. I'd love to know what you think of SNORING BEAUTY'S ROYAL PROBLEM.<br /><br />Happy Valentine's Day. 🙂
I have no good title yet, so I will just call it CAPTAIN BILGEWATER.<br /><br />Thanks for your generosity!
Thank you for the opportunity. My story is called Anna's Red Hair
Thank you, Jean, and Happy Valentine's Day!<br /><br />My title is "Turkey Training".
Jean, thanks so much for this contest. Here's my working title…<br /><br />"The Best Story Ever"<br /><br />Best Regards,<br />Jeremy
Woot! You are a gem, Jean!<br /><br />My pb is "There's a Pigeon on the Plane!"
Dancing Matilda<br /><br />Thanks for this opportunity!
Thanks for another great opportunity Jean! My working title is BECOMING GRACE.
TORIA MOVED AWAY<br /><br />Thanks so much for doing this! 🙂
Happy Valenines!<br />Thank you for doing this. To be drawn would be like winning the lotto and I would be sooo happy! I wish everyone the best of "lotto" luck!<br />My title:<br />"The Doodles"
Happy Valentines Day! What a lovely idea!<br /><br />Fingers crossed that you will draw "Dinnertime!" out of your hat. <br /><br />Thanks for the contest opportunity.
Sammy's Busy Morning<br /><br />thanks
What a fabulous opportunity! My working title is My Sister the Princess. Thanks, Jean!
This is a wonderful offer. Thank you! <br /><br />My title is "Drain Dragon".
WHOOOPEEEE! I'VE PICKED A WINNER – or actually Random Number Generator picked it for me!! I can't wait to read …<br /><br />GRANNY PAM ON THE ROOF!<br /><br />Kangaroobee you have 72 hours to send me your manuscript as a Word attachment. Please send it to reidy(dot)jean(at)gmail(dot)com.<br /><br />CONGRATULATIONS!!
Thank you so much Jean!!! I just found out on twitter. 🙂