Picture Book Peek: Critique and Copies for a Cause!!!

Bridget Zinn’s family and friends are stepping up again with another auction to help Bridget in her battle with cancer.

My Thanksgiving Picture Book Peek Week will be a part of this auction. I’ll be donating one fiction picture book (up to 1000 words) manuscript critique as well as signed copies of TOO PURPLEY! and TOO PICKLEY!

Here are the details:

Season of Love and Hope

Starts: November 22, 2010 08:00 AM CST
Ends: December 04, 2010 09:00 PM CST

Description:

All proceeds from this auction will go to Bridget Zinn and Barrett Dowell. Bridget was diagnosed with stage 4 colon cancer in February 2009. After receiving treatment in Portland for 18 months, Bridget and her husband Barrett are now traveling to Phoenix for one week every month for innovative treatment at the Cancer Treatment Centers of America. Not all of their costs for this promising treatment are covered by insurance. Bridget & Barrett’s friends and family are rallying to help them pay the bills so that they can focus on Bridget’s health and kick cancer. Artists, authors, and other friends and acquaintances have donated items in the spirit of love and hope.

Check out all the auction items and bid at THE SEASON OF LOVE AND HOPE.

2010 National Book Award Finalists

FINALISTS FOR 2010 NATIONAL BOOK AWARDS

Fiction

Peter Carey, Parrot and Olivier in America (Alfred A. Knopf)

Jaimy Gordon, Lord of Misrule (McPherson & Co.)

Nicole Krauss, Great House (W.W. Norton & Co.)

Lionel Shriver, So Much for That (Harper, an imprint of HarperCollinsPublishers)

Karen Tei Yamashita, I Hotel (Coffee House Press)


Nonfiction


Barbara Demick, Nothing to Envy: Ordinary Lives in North Korea
(Spiegel & Grau, an imprint of The Random House Publishing Group)

John W. Dower, Cultures of War: Pearl Harbor, Hiroshima, 9-11, Iraq

(W.W. Norton & Co.)

Patti Smith, Just Kids (Ecco, an imprint of HarperCollinsPublishers)

Justin Spring, Secret Historian: The Life and Times of Samuel Steward (Farrar, Straus & Giroux)

Megan K. Stack, Every Man in This Village Is a Liar: An Education in War (Doubleday)


Poetry

Kathleen Graber, The Eternal City (Princeton University Press)

Terrance Hayes, Lighthead (Viking Penguin)

James Richardson, By the Numbers (Copper Canyon Press)

C.D. Wright, One with Others (Copper Canyon Press)

Monica Youn, Ignatz (Four Way Books)



Young People’s Literature


Paolo Bacigalupi, Ship Breaker (Little, Brown & Co.)

Kathryn Erskine, Mockingbird (Philomel Books, a division of Penguin Young Readers Group)

Laura McNeal, Dark Water (Alfred A. Knopf)

Walter Dean Myers, Lockdown (Amistad, an imprint of HarperCollinsPublishers)

Rita Williams-Garcia, One Crazy Summer (Amistad, an imprint of HarperCollinsPublishers)

My Thoughts and Actions After Manuscript Submissions

Perfect.
(Hit send)
(Immediately check inbox)
Editor is reading it right now.
Editor is pumping her fist mouthing “You nailed it, Jean.”
(Check inbox)
Editor is calling Caldecott Honor illustrator and saying, “Your other projects will have to wait.”
(Check inbox)
Editor is reading it to her staff and they’re toasting me.
(Check inbox)
Editor is waiting to read it over her lunch break.
(Check inbox)
Editor is thinking it’s sweet.
Editor is thinking it’s good.
Editor is thinking it’s okay.
(Check inbox)
Editor is thinking blah, blah, blah.
She’s wondering, “What was Jean thinking?”
She’s wondering, “What was Jean drinking?”
(Check inbox)
Editor is losing her lunch.
(Check inbox)
Editor is telling her staff, “Those were 2 minutes of my life I’ll never get back.”
She is telling her mom, “I just saved the world from another awful picture book.”
(Check inbox)
She’s asking for matches.
She’s taking up smoking.
She’s holding a match to my manuscript.
(Curse inbox)
(Ping)
I’ve got mail.
“Dear Jean,”
(to be continued…)

The Temptation to Teach a Lesson

I recently autographed dozens of bookplates for TOO PICKLEY! with personalizations for children, but requested primarily by adults. In many of the requests, I was instructed to inscribe mini-warnings like “Remember to eat your veggies” or “Fruits come first.” I find it interesting that, as adults, we can’t seem to let go of those “teachable moments.”

It can be difficult to write picture books and forget that we are responsible, mature adults. But in fact, this is what we’re called to do. We need to take off our mommy hats or teacher hats or librarian hats or simply, our adult hats, to write for children. Because even the most creatively camouflaged lessons or messages can be sniffed out by a kid.

That’s not to say that picture books lack depth. For most, a delectable thread runs behind and beyond the words on the page. With repeated readings, a book opens itself up, subtly allowing children to discover – on their own – hidden surprises or stories behind and beyond the story or even (gulp!) messages, without the author or adult imposing them on the child. But discoveries don’t stand a chance if the child isn’t first entertained.

The same holds true in chapter books and novels – which brings up Junie B. Jones. Some adult readers have banned Junie because of her imperfect grammar and behavior. Junie was my youngest daughter’s first read-alone series. She collected the books. She was the expert on Junie. Most importantly she loved reading them. And I loved them too. And we read them together.

Do Junie haters truly believe that young readers are learning “grammar lessons” from our little heroine? Aren’t readers more likely to laugh at Junie’s harmless antics and monologues rather than mimic them? Must we always succumb to the temptation of teachable moments OR can we give kids opportunities to rediscover and apply their own lessons and life experiences in the comfort and safety of stories they love?

What do you think?

Pay it Forward Friday: Getting Over Your Perspective

I got a chance to share one of my favorite writing exercises on My Word Playground. If you haven’t visited Lynne Marie’s blog yet, check it out. It’s full of thoughtful prompts, exercises and general advice for children’s writers.

While our lives and experiences provide inspiration for a playground full of stories, our perspective can get us into trouble when writing for children. We have to clearly understand our perspective before we can rein it in. This fun exercise will help you do just that.

Happy Friday!!
Jean

Upcoming Appearances!

Here’s where I’ll be in the next few months!

September 18-19, 2010 – RMCSCBWI Conference Presenter, Denver CO

October 2, 2010 – Koelbel Public Library 2-3 P.M.

October 18, 2010 – Davies Public Library 1-2 P.M.

October 23, 2010 – Castlewood Public Library 10:30-11:30

November 3, 2010 – National Association for the Education of Young Children Panel, Anaheim, CA

November 12, 2010 – St. Anthony School and The Keystone School, San Antonio, TX.

My Writing Space


A listserv question prompted me to talk about my writing space today.

I have plenty of possible “offices” in my house, but I’ve always been a kitchen table kind of girl.

I remember doing high school geometry across my family’s kitchen table from my “Nonna” who lived with us.

She would ask me, in Italian. “What are you working on now, Jeanie?” And I would do my best to explain triangles to this magnificently smart woman who boasted only a 3rd grade education. She died when I was just out of college.

I’m still drawn to my kitchen table – albeit a different one – surrounded by activity and FOOD …

and often a sweet Italian angel voice saying “What are you working on now, Jeanie?”

Happy Friday!
Jean

P.S. Above is a picture of my writing space today!!

It’s never too late for TOO PICKLEY!

Thanks to all who attended the TOO PICKLEY! PARTY!!
But if you missed it OR you just want to keep on partying, the fun continues.

Congratulations to all the TOO PICKLEY PARTY winners!

The TOO PICKLEY PARTY was so much fun! Congratulations to all the prize winners.

Monday’s Door Prize, TOO PICKLEY! T-shirt and signed softcover book – Amy Dixon
Tuesday’s Door Prize, Bloomsbury Picture Book Pack – Denise Schurr
Wednesday’s Door Prize, Bloomsbury Picture Book Pack – Brigette Brankin
Thursday’s Door Prize, copies of TOO PURPLEY! and TOO PICKLEY! – Crissy Medley
Friday’s Door Prize, TOO PICKLEY T-shirt and signed book – Alexa Kaufhold
Saturday’s Door Prize, Bloomsbury Picture Book Pack – Lisa Perez

Picture Book Manuscript Critique – Susanne Drazic

30-Minute Skype Visit – Paul Hankins

TOO PICKLEY! Grand Prize Package – Janice Ostrander

Thank you to all who attended!

TOO PICKLEY! PARTY STARTS 8/23/2010!!

Please help me celebrate the release of my picture book
TOO PICKLEY!
(Bloomsbury)
It’s an online party with door prizes, party favors and more.

Kids, Parents, Grandparents, Readers – Come join the fun and win prizes.
Writers – Win a Picture Book Peek critique.
Teachers/Librarians – Win a Skype visit or the
Grand Prize TOO PICKLEY! Package.

Where: www.jeanreidy.com
When: August 23-28, 2010 (Midnight to Midnight Mountain Time)
We’ll be partying all week long.

A portion of my author proceeds from the sale of
TOO PICKLEY!
will benefit
The Children’s Hospital

Spread the word. Invite your friends.
No R.S.V.P. necessary.
I hope you can drop on by.